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Wednesday, 27 February 2013

Spot the Error

Our current topic of the week is critiquing. As explained on the group, I discovered a faux pas on a poster I had sent to a church - after it had been checked by five other people. So - for fun - let's see how quickly you spot the error.


5 comments:

  1. Oh my word, how on earth didn't I spot it the first, second, third time I proof read. Nobody will want me for a crit partner now LOL.

    Next time I'll work work doubly hard to spot those nasty little errors. I tend to do the same thing in my own writing ... change the sentence structure and then forget a word in the second part of the sentence and then duplicate it in the first part.

    Shirl, I guess, you can guess that I've spotted the mistake - sorry I didn't see it sooner, and thankfully I wasn't the only one (are you sure you didn't slip it in there afterward? LOL) I'm not going to say what it is and spoil the fun for others.

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  2. LOL! I just realised I'm off the hook - I didn't proof read this one ... or was it copied and adjusted from the one sheet I did proof? (she says worried).

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  3. Yes, saw it! Easier when it's work not your own work.

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  4. DENYING THE WORDS OF GOD THE FATHER!

    When men deny the truth found in the Scriptures; they are denying the words of God the Father. When men deny the truth spoken by Jesus; they are denying the words of God the Father. When men deny the doctrine of the apostles; they are denying the words of God the Father.

    All Scripture is the word of God the Father.

    2 Timothy 3:16 All Scripture is given by inspiration of God, and is profitable for doctrine, for reproof, for correction, for instruction in righteousness,(NKJV)

    All that Jesus spoke was from God the Father.

    John 12:49-50 "For I have not spoken on My own authority; but the Father who sent Me gave Me a command, what I should say and what I should speak. 50 "And I know that His command is everlasting life. Therefore, whatever I speak, just as the Father has told Me, so I speak."(NKJV)

    All of the apostles doctrine was from God the Father. Why was that? Because Jesus taught the apostles and all of the words of Jesus were from God the Father.

    John 14:26 "But the Helper, the Holy Spirit, whom the Father will send in My name, He will teach you all things, and bring to your remembrance all things that I said to you.(NKJV)

    John 16:13-14 "However, when He, the Spirit of truth, has come, He will guide you into all truth; for He will not speak on His own authority, but whatever He hears He will speak; and He will tell you things to come. 14 "He will glorify Me, for He will take of what is Mine and declare it to you.

    All the teaching from the Holy Spirit came from Jesus and all the words of Jesus came from God the Father.

    There are no Scriptures that declare that church creed books, (catechisms) or any other extra-Biblical writings are that of God the Father. Remember; all Scripture is inspired by God. Creed books are not Scripture. No extra-Biblical writing is Scripture.

    HOW DO MEN DENY THE WORDS OF GOD THE FATHER?

    1. When men claim there is more than one God; they are denying the words of God the Father.

    Ephesians 4:6 one God and Father of all, who is above all, and through all, and in you all.(NKJV)

    2. When men declare that Jesus did not say water baptism precedes salvation; they are denying the words of God the Father.

    Mark 16:16 "He who believes and is baptized will be saved...(NKJV)

    3. When men say that Christians cannot fall from grace; they denying the words of God the Father.

    Galatians 5:4 You have become estranged from Christ, you who attempt to be justified by law; you have fallen from grace.(NKJV)

    All Scripture is inspired by God the Father.

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  5. Yup, I caught it too. But not on the first reading...

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